Kloe,
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 16 June 2020
My crayon letter
Kloe,
5 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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ReplyDeleteHi Jen thanks for the comment I think if I added more it would many.
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Kia ora Kloe,
ReplyDeleteWow this blog post is amazing!
I like how you used Capital letters and exclamation marks in your writing.
Your drawing is really cool and it looks very creative.
Maybe next time you could use exclamation marks more sensibly and use paragraphs to make it a bit more easier to read.
Overall this blog post was amazing great job!
Sup Jen thanks for the comment, I´m glad you like my drawing
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Hi Kloe this is really funny i like how the the crayon called the cat bug eyed you should do a black crayon letter!
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