Wednesday, 6 November 2019

Darkside

 This is my story called Darkside it's about a girl that likes to run. She meets someone in a dark cloud and she tries to figure out his name but she make a bad decision.                      


Chapter 1

One day a Girl named Oceana was running around she saw a dark area she ran to it to be stopped by a shadow. She saw his dark red eyes. “h-h-h-hi” she stuttered.

He said nothing as he stared into her ocean blue eyes and whispered “your not safe here.” She tried to talk to him but he turned and walked into the dark cloud. She went to follow him but he said “GO!” “not until i know your name” she answered. 
“go home we will meet at night” He said in an unpromising tone.
she studded “o-o-ok” and ran home. 

Later that night she ran to the same place they had met earlier. She said “hello” no sound came from anywhere or the dark shadow she took a few steps towards the dark shadow “hello” she called out again. Two hours past, she wondered if he will show. 

She stepped near the dark cloud putting in half her face. She called out “Hello” he ran and pushed her back into the open field. Looking into her once ocean blue left eye and he said “Your left eye it is now red” and left.     

    Chapter 2
She ran home and looked in the mirror.
“He was right my left eye is red” again she ran to the dark shadow and yelled “WHY HAS THIS HAPPENED!” he called back “because you ran into the shadow”


She called “What's your name?” as he was going to tell her his name his father dragged him back in the misty shadow Oceana cried “come back” nothing was heard but the yells of his father saying “What are you doing!!” “father she has one red eye” his father ran to see if Oceana was there. 

His father said “what's your name?” she said “Oceana” nothing but silence came from the dark misty shadow. “Hello” called Oceana nothing. She ran back home sad and alone.
                    

          Chapter 3
It has been three days since she saw him sometimes she runs over to where they met. On the fourth day she ran to see the shadow gone. “Was this all in my head” She thought. She was going to run home confused and then something whispered “bye” she turned around to see him standing in black cloud, “h-hi” said Oceana “hi Oceana” he said softly. She replied “what's your name? You know mine” he said nothing as he left…  

   2 years later

Oceana was now 15 years old. She was hoping she could see his dark red eyes again. She hallucinates him sometimes standing there looking at her.

 Her one red eye starts to fade when she is sad or remembers his beautiful red eyes. She starts to see her other eye turn red so she goes to the eye contacts shop. 

she said, “Can I have a pair of ocean blue eye contacts” they were given to her. She put them in and looked in a mirror. “Just like my eye colour” she whispered and walked home. 

  Chapter 4
She is moving to Auckland away from Christchurch her home she doesn't but wont to move. she must because the pain she feels near the field where they met was consuming her on the inside. Eating at her she had no choice. When she arrived she went to a hotel. She went for a morning run she saw the black cloud again. She was puzzled her eye turn back to her normal eye when the black cloud faded away. Unaware of her eye she ran home. He was standing in her room he looked at her and said ̈my name is Damon, come with me to the Darksi- ̈  ̈OMG yes¨ He open a portal and in they went.


10 years later
They had 2 kids an 11 year old and a 10 year old they live in the universe in the dark cloud and go to school until one day...
  By Kloe Evans

2 comments:

  1. Hi my name is Shivish I'm from owairaka school I like the story you made it was distscripive.

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    1. Hi Shivish,Thank you for reading this, im glad you liked it. i'm currently writing a second one called Light fades into darkness.

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