Revenge of the trees

W.A.L.T: write a narrative

In room 2 we have been writing Narratives this is mine. A narrative is a story that can be non-fiction or fiction and it contains a bad guy, a good guy, characters and it also contains a setting. 

Revenge of the trees.

In the previous story the neighbour kills the turtles then the trees are trying to be good  by getting revenge on the bad neighbour.

9:00am Tuesday 4th of October 2013

Rainbow and Red and Black trees are waiting in the neighbours dead lawn waiting to attack…….

The neighbour suddenly looks outside through his dirty window and says to himself, “ Hmm I killed my trees”.

He suspiciously walked outside. The trees suddenly attacked with their guns but they missed the shot, but randomly he summons a robot  to kill the trees. The robot strongly slices the rainbow tree.


The red and black tree becomes angry with rage and destroys the robot. The neighbour runs away looking for his  weapons in self defence. When he returns he has 260 bullets a shotgun and a katakana and yelled “GOT YA” and unleashes all his bullets but missed.

The red and black tree yelled “Hahahahahaha” and quickly unleashes 300 bullets and the neighbour died. The red and black tree rushes inside the neighbour's house gets nails, wood and a hammer. Then nails the wood to the rainbow tree and they walk home and chill.

                                     The End or is it?

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