It is unbelievable that people think that everyone should have pets. They are violent,expensive and easily neglectable creatures.
Firstly, they can be violent,vicious and can even kill people. This risk is even higher if you have a small child because they pull on tails and annoy them. Any pet can be vicious like my teacher Miss Pownalls Fish. She had 3 fish Hunter, Cleo and ruby. Hunter was a special fish… One day when Miss Pownall came home from school she saw Ruby was missing a fin the next day Ruby was missing another find on the last day Ruby was missing and Hunter was a lot fatter than before so Miss Pownall separated Cleo and Hunter. See any pet can be vicious.
Secondly, they are not cheap they cost MONEY. Nowadays cat food is $12.99 and some cats need heaps of food and that's just cats imagine Dogs, Birds, Fish and more.
My Nana spends more than $15 on biscuits and $10 at least on wet food and that's just food!
Finally, they are easily neglectable, imagine being a cat or dog or any animal and not having food or water or even a home! These animals end up with anxiety and serious behaviour changes also their mental heath.
I have a dog called Judy before we got her she was called swifer and was neglected by her previous owner, now she shakes a lot and get frighted easily. See the wrong owner/environment can harm animals mentally.
In conclusion, not every one can have pets. This is because they are vicious, expensive and neglectable.
I like it how you put a lot of effort in your work
ReplyDeleteWell done Kloe for your awesome piece of persuasive writing. I can tell that this is something that you're passionate about and I love the way that you are paragraphing too!
ReplyDeleteMiss Pownall.